Saturday, May 5, 2012

So I have told myself for a long time that I would write a book. I have started a few times and even have a few pages of writing done. I have created a setting and have been working on fleshing it out (history, culture, technology), I have created some characters and have tried to work out their motivations and desires, and I have thought of some plots. I just need to sit down and write it out (this it turns out is the hardest part).

In an attempt to get myself going I'm going to start documenting my progress here. I will post pages and hopefully even chapters of my work here. By doing this maybe I'll get to a full novel. I'm also going to be posting idea on how this all could be made into a video game (another thing that I would like to see happen with my ideas).

Without any further ado here is the first part of what I have written so far, enjoy.

The Aurora Chronicles
By
Joshua Chumbley

How Kyle Got His Start in the World


            The noise from the village green indicated that the preparations for the harvest festival were in full swing. Kyle sneered at the scene from under the tree he was leaning against. All he saw were people who complained about the weather and would work themselves in the fields till they died.
            From the gray rock to the weathered shake shingles, all the buildings looked as if they had been in place for eons. The only patch of color, the green, was quickly being trampled into the gray ubiquitousness that defined the village. Women carried trays of food from the tavern to the tables the men had set up earlier. It was late in the day and things were starting to cool off. The men, taking a break from work, were gathered around a keg boisterously talking with each other. Kyle's thoughts were black as he studied the activity. It was time to get out of this insignificant village.
            He turned his back to the bustle and strode towards the woods that bordered the north edge of town. As he passed the inn he heard Tina call out, "Kyle, what's the rush?"
            Her voice stopped him, "I think it's time for us to leave."
            "What? No. Come inside and let's talk about this," she said as he approached her. "I thought we hadn't decided anything yet. Besides, you don't have enough money to travel do you?"
            Kyle bent and gave her a kiss. As they entered the inn's kitchen Kyle said, "I have the money needed to travel and I can join a Controller guard when I get there. That should be enough."
            "But my father is finally starting to like you. If we marry I'm sure he will allow you to take over the inn when the time comes."
            "I want nothing to do with this place! I thought we had agreed we are leaving when we have a chance. I have the money for travel and I will find work when we get to Norlen."
            Tina turned away and leaned against the counter in the center of the room. "Why do we have to leave? We can have a life here. Everybody will warm up to you if you would let them." She turned back, wet trails on her face. "Haven't I been good to you? I gave you my maidenhood. I…"
            "WHAT!" Tina's father wasn't a small man; he came through the door leading to the beer hall so fast that he hit his head on the door frame. He went to his knees. "Boy if what my daughter just said is true I will kill you!"
            He slowly rose to his feet he reach for a carving knife and looked at his daughter, "Didn't I tell he was bastard and now you'll be carrying one of his spawn."
            "Don't hurt him. I love Kyle."
            The wordless bellow that came forth was Kyle's cue to leave. He turned and sprinted out the door. He wasn't sure how he'd come back for Tina but there was nothing he could do at the moment. As he got to the tree line he looked back. Tina was standing in the back door to the kitchen using her apron to wipe her eyes. Of more immediate concern was her father steaming towards him.
            Kyle was large for his age but still smaller than the innkeeper. He started to work his way deeper into the woods using the underbrush as cover. Eventually the sounds of pursuit deadened. Kyle stopped for a moment to catch his breath. In the distance he heard the innkeeper, "Boy, you are a man now and you had better live up to the responsibility. If you don't return before dark I will make sure you and your mother have no place here!"
            Kyle took a few deep breaths. He needed to get to the clearing where the money and all the things he and Lem had collected were hidden. Between Kyle's hard work and Lem's thefts over the past year there was probably enough to buy all the needs for a trip to Norlen. His mother would need warned of what had happened too.
            It took Kyle almost an hour to find the trail to the clearing. As he entered he saw Lem crouched over facing the stump where the money was hidden.
            "What did you find Lem?"
            Lem stood up quickly turning to Kyle. The box that had the money was behind him, open. Lem kept his hands hidden, "I was just making sure I get my share Kyle."
            "Show me what you're hiding Lem."
            "I'm not hiding anything Kyle. I was just looking at our haul. There's a lot of money and jewelry here. I think we could split it now and be free of this place" There was a clink as something fell into the box. Lem smiled and slowly brought out his left hand. "Come on, Kyle. Let's split this and leave."
            Kyle started to walk towards Lem. "Drop whatever is in your other hand then we'll talk about splitting it."
            As Kyle got closer Lem started to grin bigger. Kyle stopped short just as Lem's right hard came out in an arcing motion towards Kyle's face. He threw his hand up and felt a line of fire cut across his left palm. Lem finished his swing and Kyle pulled his hand back to gape at the blood pooling in his palm. He looked up in time to see the knife coming point first towards him.
            "The stuff is mine! They hate you because you're a bastard but they hate me because they know I'm the thief! They are going to have the sheriff arrest me tonight! In front of everybody! I heard them talking!"
            Kyle threw himself out of the way feeling another line blaze across his upper arm as he went to the ground. He rolled and tried to scramble to his feet. As his hands moved across the ground of the clearing he felt a fallen branch. He grabbed it with his uninjured hand and swung it in an arc as he came to his feet. The branch broke as it hit Lem's hand, knocking the knife away and throwing him off balance as he barreled into Kyle. Kyle spun keeping his feet as Lem went down on his face. Kyle jumped on Lem's back and brought the rest of the branch down on Lem's head. Lem went limp.
            Kyle dropped the remains of the branch. Trembling he walked toward the money box and sat down next to it leaning against the stump. He looked down at the box a saw his mother's pendant. I was a simple piece of jewelry, a black square no bigger than his thumgnail with a silver loop at the top where it attached to the chain. She didn't wear it often but he knew it was important to her. Lem had been through with his thievery. Kyle had never like Lem but he had been useful and easy to control. Lem was right about not being well liked but he had family in the village and if Lem wasn't around tonight when the festivities kicked off Kyle would be the first suspect.
            Kyle grabbed his mother's pendant stuffing it in a pocket on his pants and closed the lid to the money box. He got up with the box under his arm, walked over to Lem and gave him a kick to the ribs getting no reaction. He bent over and ripped off a strip from Lem's shirt. Grabbing the box again, he wrapped the strip of cloth around his hand and started on the trail that led back towards home. Hopefully there was a way out of this mess.

            It was late in the day, the sun creeping towards the horizon, by the time Kyle made it back to his house. He peeked in a window as he went to the door to the one room shack he and his mother called home. His mother was at her work bench making clothes. She looked up as the door opened. "Kyle! You are a mess what have – You're bleeding! What happened?"
            She sat Kyle on her stool and examined the cut on his arm. "This is a clean cut. How did you get a slash on your arm?"
            "I have one on my hand too, ma." She unwrapped his hand.
            "What happened? I'm going have to stitch both of these. I'm going to the mayor about this tonight. This is serious."
            "You can't. He's not too happy with me. And the cuts are from Lem. He pulled a knife on me when I caught him with this." He pulled the pendant from his pocket.
            "How did he get that?"
            "Probably the same way he got the rest of this stuff." He opened the box showing her the money and valuables inside. "I had planned on leaving this village today and had been saving money from my work. Lem was going around collecting things that might be worth money. It looks like he stole everything of value that he could move easily. We were going to split it and leave but now I'm not so sure. I think I killed Lem. I can't let anybody see me and I have got to go. Tina's dad wants kill me; he thinks I have taken Tina's maidenhood."
            "Kyle, you haven't exactly given me any hope here but we might be able to make things right. If you have Taken Tina's maidenhood you'll have to marry her. If Lem and you did steal all this you'll have to make it up to everybody but if Lem is truly dead… Oh, son, why do you do these things?" She looked haggard.
            "It's not my fault, ma. Look at how they have treated us here. If my father was here –"
            "Your father isn't here. That pendant was the last thing he gave me before he left. He said it was the most valuable thing he could give me and that we would not see each other again. Those were bad days with the Controllers fighting because Aurora's Administrator had disappeared."
            "Yeah, yeah, he left you pregnant and me a bastard. I don't want to do that to Tina but I will not stay here as well. I'm leaving. You can give all this stuff back to everyone but I'm taking the money."
            "Wait, Kyle, let me talk with the mayor."
            "No. I'm getting Tina and leaving. I'm going to join a Controller guard in Norlen. Maybe I'll become a Controlled myself."
            Kyle stood, grabbed all the money from the box and turned to his mother holding the pendant out to her. She shook her head. "Keep it Kyle. Maybe it will be useful to you. Where is the clearing where you left Lem? Someone will have to see to him."
            Kyle provided the directions to the clearing. As he went out the door he turned back, "I'll return someday. I'll be somebody and I will make sure you never have to sew anything again."
            "Son, this isn't a solution. There is a place for you here if you would just stop and think for a second."
            "I hate this place. I'll take care of Lem. I don't need help." Kyle slammed the door and stomped back towards the clearing.

            Kyle heard the sound of voices as he approached the clearing. The jingle of equipment carried through the forest. He crouched into the brush and got off the trail; as he got closer the voices resolved into laughter and coarse jokes.
            "Cut his balls off, Garth. He doesn't need them," came one call. "Yeah, he had a knife and still got whipped," came another.
            "No! I just got unlucky. It's not my fault!" yelled Lem.
            "Yes, luck is a good scapegoat isn't it? I don't believe in luck. I thought you might be a good addition to my motley band but your friend seem better suited to joining us than you do. Now where's is the money and valuables you promised us?"
            As Kyle got closer he saw that the last speaker was a Controller, but his uniform wasn't the pristine white and gold normally associated with Controllers, it was dingy and stained. The men with him looked nothing like Enforcers or Controller guards though they were carrying the black arm-length fire lances and the shorter sheriff's guns.
            "I'm not sure. He was hiding it in the stump but he must have taken it after our fight. Maybe he took it home."
            "Well I guess we'll be paying him a house call won't we?" As the Controller said this he raised his hand. A dark cloud formed around it. The cloud extended towards Lem's neck. He tried to back away.
            "Don't move! I don't want to hurt you yet," said Garth. The cloud resolved itself into a silvery collar attached to a leash that the Controller held. "Let's go," he said.
            "Don't hurt my family. We have a sheriff," Lem whined.
            "If you don't start moving I'll kill everyone including you. Now move."
            Kyle crept back deeper into the underbrush of the woods. He had to get home quickly but if he made too much noisy these rebels would kill him. The trail wasn't an option that would be the route that Lem would lead them on. Kyle moved slowly till he judged himself to be out of earshot. He moved as fast as he could through the brush and trees taking the most direct route he could home.
            The sun was going down as he came to the edge of the woods. Through the trees he could an orange glow. Kyle wiped the sweat from his eyes as he worked his way out of the forest. Seeing the house on fire he yelled, "Ma! Mother! Where are you?"
            He ran closer but the heat stopped him. Circling the building he kept calling for his mother. The house had collapsed into a pile of blackened timbers and ash. Anything or anyone inside was beyond saving. Then Kyle remembered his mother's statement about talking with the mayor. He turned towards the village and saw an orange glow and several columns of smoke in the twilight. He took off at a sprint.

            As Kyle reached the edge of the village he moved close to the building and hoped no one would see him. The town meeting hall was on fire and as he got sight of the green he saw that everything was in disarray. He moved behind the blacksmith's to get a better view. Some tables had been overturned and the food scattered and there were scorch marks in the grass. Some of the men he'd seen earlier with Lem were standing at the edge of the green with their back to Kyle. As Kyle looked past them he saw the bodies. It looked like the whole village. They were in a large pile in front of the inn. Kyle felt tears come. He move out of sight and was sick. As he regained his senses he heard a voice. It was Garth.
            "… years to find out where it went. Now we're here and nobody seems to have it. You said you found all the jewelry and that you would deliver it to me. You have not followed through on your portion of this agreement now I don't think I need you."
            "P-please don't kill me! Kyle has it!" Lem was there in the middle of the green sobbing. Garth stood over him.
            "Boy you have explained this already. We found no one at the house you led us to and no box with my jewels in it. We are done." Garth released the leash that was connected to the collar around Lem's neck. "Run." Lem took off at a sprint but before he had gone two steps he stopped bringing his hands up to his neck where the collar was. He opened his mouth in a scream but no sound came out. His eyes started to bulge and he fell over. He writhed on the ground for a few minutes and then stopped.
            Garth turned to his men. "Alright, his friend is the one who had the artifact last. He will probably return here. I want a perimeter around the village and anyone who enters to be brought here." The men began to disperse but then Garth spoke again, "Stop. We have incoming. It's time to leave."
            As the last bandits disappeared past the inn and into the woods Kyle slowly walked from behind the blacksmith and surveyed the green. Nothing moved and the fires cast stark shadows. He walked past Lem whose hands were still at his neck and face had turned black. Kyle walked towards the pile of bodies. As he looked on his heart froze. Halfway behind her father was Tina. There would be no more hiding in the inn's hayloft. Kyle turned and fell to his hands and knees. Once the retching stopped Kyle. Kyle got up walked a few steps then sat on the green with his back to the massacre. He looked down at his hands. He had hated this place but now it was gone.
            A muffled sound came from the pile. Kyle jumped up and ran back to the pile. There he saw a hand sticking out. It was moving. He grabbed it and pulled. It was his mother. She looked up at him and smiled. He pulled her free and dragged her to a clear spot on the green. He sat and cradled her head in his lap.
            "Ma, I'm so sorry. Tina's dead. This wasn't supposed to happen."
            "Kyle it's not your fault those men or someone like them would have come eventually. The want what you father gave to me and what I have given to you." Her face twisted in a grimace. There was a black cut angling from the bottom of the left side of her ribcage to her right shoulder. When he touched it, it crumbled like charcoal.
            "Leave it be Kyle. I have seen men with injuries like mine… they never last long unless a Controller is near. It doesn't hurt that much. I just want to sleep a little now. I'm glad you are okay, son."

            "Boy… boy. Boy! Wake up!"
            Kyle jumped as a hand shook his shoulder. As he looked around he saw that his mother was gone. "Where is she?!" He screamed as he leapt to his feet. He turned to attack the person who had woke him but stopped short when he saw the pristine white with gold embroidery of a Controller. Behind the Controller were four Enforcers their matte black armor spoke of shadows and death. They had leveled their fire lances at him. The burning buildings still illuminated the green. All the bodied that had been piled in front of the meeting hall were also gone. Kyle slumped back down.
            "They have gone to the Aurora. She will see to them now. You will tell me what has happened here." As the Controller said this he gestured for the Enforcers to put their weapons away.
            "They killed them all and a Controller led them. He said he was looking for something. He was called Garth. Is my mother alive?"
            "The woman you were holding? She was sent with the rest. Aurora will decide their fates. Which way did this 'Controller' go?"
            "They went north into the woods. They have fire lances and sheriff guns. How come they came here? Why did they kill everyone?" The Controller made some gestures towards the woods as Kyle told him which way the bandits had gone.
            The Enforcers formed up and the Controlled told Kyle, "We are going and you should leave too. There is nothing here for you now and I don't have time to watch you. Go to the closest village and make a new life there." The Controller turned and led the Enforcers towards the trees.
            "Wait! Let me join you! I know what they look like!" Kyle got up and ran toward their departing backs.
            The Controlled turned and raised his hand. The Enforcers brought their lances back to bear on Kyle. "I told you, I will not waste my time on an orphan boy who will get in my way. Now leave and don't follow."
            Kyle had come to a sudden stop and collapsed back to the ground. He didn't watch as the Controller and his Enforcer squad disappeared in to the woods. He felt tears running down his cheeks.
           
            Kyle woke to find the sun beating on his face. He got up from where he had passed out and surveyed the ruin before him. Most of the fires had burned out and the ashes just smoldered. Flies buzzed around the food that sat on the tables that were still upright. Kyle's stomach rumbled. He walked over to the remains of the unfinished feast and started to gather the best looking portions of food gathering it into a one of the cleaner looking cloths that had covered the tables.
            After he had gathered what he hoped was enough to last till the next village he checked his pockets. His mother's pendant was still there. He put it around his neck then started walking the road out of the village.